Archive | September, 2011

Zap-Pow! Then What Happened? Tension is king. Never miss an opportunity for a good argument! Definition: Most of us hate conflict and confrontation. Even in our books. But tension is king! Donald Maass suggest tension on every page. Better yet, on every line. Tension doesn’t mean argument. Tension means “things aren’t going well.” For example: A conflict arises for your heroine. She gets pulled over for speeding. Instead of the officer letting her off, she gets a ticket. This upsets her. While she’s getting a ticket, her mother calls to say Uncle Ned is coming Sunday and our girl is expected at the house for dinner. She blows up. Why is Mama always so bossy?  Our heroine will do what she wants for Sunday dinner. She might have plans already. Ever […]

Cry Me A River Telling emotion rather than showing. Definition: Showing verses telling applies primarily to emotion. It’s the authors job to show the reader what the characters are doing and feeling. Even what the character is thinking through the action on the page. Telling means the author is describing the emotion and reaction in the prose. Struggling to show verses tell might mean the author doesn’t know what the characters want in the scene or the scene goal. Showing “pictures” the emotion, pictures the action. Most authors do this well. He slammed the door shut as he left the room. She gunned the gas as she headed for home. We get they are angry. But where we get a bit lost is in showing the emotion of the scene. […]