*** Feeling along the wall, she found the edge of the secret door, camouflaged with thin stones to mimic the rest of the structure. Her right hand sought the key tucked between her bodice and under gown for silence; she’d even switched the chain that held it for a leather thong to prevent the clink of metal on metal. Her free hand groped the wall for the keyhole. Waist-high, five forearms from the corner. She found it, and bent to slide the key inside. To the left. Chink. Karel straightened to gain better control of the key as she used it as a doorknob to ease the door open. Quietly, if possible. The door shifted an inch, then two. Something tickled the back of her neck. She didn’t have time […]
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The Six Elements to an Inciting Incident!
What do all I.I. have in common? I wanted to touch briefly on the elements of an Inciting Incident today before I post the winning I.I. (and I’m telling you, it was hard to choose, thanks to the gallery of great writers in Voices!) By the way, next week, we’re going to take a breath and recap everything we’ve been talking about over the past two months, and show you how it all fits into the structure of the Hero’s Journey. So, if you’re feeling lost, or overwhelmed, I promise by the end of next week, you’ll have a framework in which to put all your gathered information and know where it will take you next on the Journey. But, today – Inciting Incident! We talked this week about WHEN […]
Read the RestThe big BANG – the hows and whens of the Inciting Incident
Let’s see, over the past hour I’ve loaded the dishwasher, checked my email, fed the dog, checked my email, browned hamburger, checked my email, made rice, searched for chocolate (none!), again checked email…. But see, I’m working. Really. What I’m doing is searching for my hero’s inciting incident. I know what has to happen later on in the scene, what I hope to accomplish, but I need something powerful, something to really pinpoint how he’s feeling at this very moment, to give the reader a glimpse into his story world, and offer enough of a motivation to under gird his next step. What I need is…a BANG! How do you determine how and when to start your story world? Do you start it on a calm day, set the scene, […]
Read the RestThe delicate balance of the inciting incident.
I love the magic of a good inciting incident. That moment when everything goes haywire – or at least hints at going haywire – in our hero’s journey. Sometimes it’s an earthquake of epic proportions, other times, it’s just a 2.5 on the Richter scale, but regardless of the strength of the event the balance of the II delivery demands an exquisite balance of delicacy and resonance. What do I mean? Delicacy in the incitation incident doesn’t mean a light touch…it means treading lightly through backstory, digging up only that which is most pertinent. It’s so easy for an author to want to load in all the significant life events of the hero that have led up to this moment. Why, when he sees the red car parked in front […]
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