Warning – this is a long post, but I wanted to walk you through all the phases. It’s a YA novel by Wendy – she didn’t tell me what her dilemma was, and it was a solid piece to start with – but I found a few things to highlight. Let’s start with the original: Paige joined me as I was walking back toward my drum. “Good morning, starshine–” she said as she bumped one of her hips into mine. “What were you doing over there?” She said it like she would have said, “What were you doing over in that place that is quarantined for deadly diseases such as small pox or the bubonic plague?” I flashed her a pained smile that I hoped said, “It was no big […]
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