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Word Painting for Emotional Effect

[taken from the July issue of the MBT Ezine. Read more about Word Painting at:  http://voicesmag.mybooktherapy.com] I love word painting. It’s the last element of texture I add into a piece before I move into polishing. It’s adding those eloquent, specific words and cadences to a sentence or paragraph that not only makes it come alive … but adds in the right emotion. A book is all about connecting to the reader’s emotions, and word painting is the finite art of wooing your words into your reader’s heart. It’s going beyond naming and telling emotions to using the painting of words to evoke the correct feeling. Let’s take a look. Here’s a piece of word painting from my current novel, Sons of Thunder: Markos speared the water. The cool lick […]

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A Therapist Thought…taken from the July Voices Ezine.

Ever read a book and think, “Wow, how did she figure out how to put that sentence, or that paragraph together? How did she pick those words, that item to focus on? How did she … word paint?” In my feature article in the current issue of the Voices Ezine, “Word Painting for Emotional Effect,” I talk about using the metaphorical word pool to find the right symbol and images.  But I also use a handy acronym to help me develop a word painted description. It’s called FOCUS: First Impression Observations Close Up, Simile (or Metaphor) First Impression is all about giving us that overview of the setting.  For example, if you were walking into a conference room, you might say:  The conference room was small but comfortable.  But you […]

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I’m Important Too! (the care and feeding of Secondary Characters!)

The use of Secondary Characters:   I’m important too!!    So, I’m sitting here at my husband’s office, mulling over today’s blog, and the front desk guy (a friend named Jim) asks me, of course, what I’m writing about:    Me:  The Use of Secondary Characters in a book. Him:  Or misuse.  (he’s an avid reader). Me:  (because I haven’t had my coffee yet…) Huh? Him:  Well, think about it, just the name:  Secondary Character.  How would you like to be called a Secondary Character?  They’re important, too!   He’s brilliant!  And right!  See, secondary characters are key to a great story.  Think of Watson, to Sherlock Holmes.  And Danny Glover to Mel Gibson (sorry to bring him up, but again, I’m needing coffee), and how about um…Bert and Ernie?  […]

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Lethal Weapons in Romance

I’m going to give away my secrets.  Well, maybe not ALL of them, but I’ve been sprinkling them through the posts and chats over the past six months as I’ve talked about writing romances, and I thought I would gather them all in one place.      What are Lethal Weapons?  Oh, these are the elements of a great romance that grab your reader’s heart, leave them weak and unable to put your book down and walk away.  These are things that make them weep and fall in love…the elements that wring them out and cause them to go buy more of your books.  J  Or read this one over and over…   Hot Dates:  Every couple needs to have one great date.  I love unique dates – I’ve had […]

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