Here it is – the final rough draft of chapter 1.2. (I am sure you are tired of reading it by now!) Note, I’ve made a few more changes (especially after reading more of the VOICES comments and reviewing SKD’s edit notes again!)
Now comes the hard work. We have to write chapter 2!
So, [...]
Category Archives: Chapter 1
Final rough draft of Chapter 1.2 + Thoughts to prep Chapter 2!
March 6, 2009 – 10:46 am
Oh, do I have a treat for you! Line Edits on Chapter 1.2!
March 5, 2009 – 5:36 pm
My good pal, Editor Extraordinaire Susan K. Downs has stepped in to add her editor’s voice to Blog-a-Book!
While Rachel, Sarah and I are Story Crafters (a Susie-ism that I’m claiming for Book Therapy!) Susan K. Downs is an award-winning editor who has worked for numerous publishers and most recently started the Spyglass mystery line [...]
Chapter 1.2 with SMW comments to RH edits. =)
March 4, 2009 – 10:45 am
Great edits once again by Rachel! Note, especially, the thoughts on the HOOK, emotional layering, and dialogue. It’s hard for me to get the flow of it when it is pieced up like this – so I might make more tweaks before I post the rough draft final tomorrow (or Friday). As usual, if you [...]
